1. i think the only reason jared was the only one who noticed her was b/c no one was noticing him either and he wasnt interested in the stuff they were doing, celestine,andre and mattu wouldnt notice her any way b/c they know what shes done, kara and mopsy are to busy planning ahead and the husband is to busy caring about the stlolen money
2. i think that the first time alake started coming out was when she got her hair cut and she started seeing that she be someone else rather than who she was she is slowly coming out of her shell her heart is slowly becoming open to all of the people around her but sometimes shell sink back in a little
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Excellent reasons for Jared being the only one to notice Alake.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your turning point. Most felt it was the puppy, however, the hair cut happened first and I think that was when she began to change.
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